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Constructive Criticism

Here you can post a to-be-post, a picture, poem or story that you want people to give constructive critism on. If you want to see if a post is up to standard, this is the place to do it. People posting replies must reply with CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM, which means ways on improvement, NOT "it sucks, learn to spell" etc.

Yeah, i SUCK at grammar!
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Posted on September 4, 2004 at 09:53:29 PM by Ark ooc

And spelling for that matter. Well SHE is very though, a loner until she mets Ark. But she didn't get shot, but she does get injured. She has hazel eyes and says what's on her mind. u think u could come up with some thing? Oh, and i did continue writing today so in your next post tell if u want to hear it!

Replies:

Hmmm... - By Black Soul September 6, 2004 at 12:08:13 PM
- Ohh! I like Nanami! - By Ark ooc September 7, 2004 at 06:31:33 PM
  - Ops! Typo! - By Ark ooc September 7, 2004 at 06:42:29 PM
    - That's alright... - By Black Soul September 7, 2004 at 09:13:43 PM
      - Thanks for telling... - By Ark ooc September 7, 2004 at 09:31:44 PM
        Sorry I didn't reply... - By Black Soul (ooc) September 11, 2004 at 07:41:45 PM
        I'm glade you do! - By Ark ooc September 12, 2004 at 11:04:14 AM
        Well, well, well... - By Black Soul (ooc) September 13, 2004 at 06:32:50 PM
        Wah i don't have any more right now! - By Ark ooc September 13, 2004 at 08:20:36 PM
        OK - By Black Rain September 13, 2004 at 08:24:00 PM
        REALY SORRY!! - By Ark ooc September 17, 2004 at 05:28:15 PM
        No prob... - By Black Soul September 17, 2004 at 09:36:22 PM
        Recap! - By Ark ooc September 24, 2004 at 06:05:03 PM
        This is coming together nicely!!! - By Black Soul September 24, 2004 at 09:27:15 PM
        Thankies! - By Ark ooc September 25, 2004 at 10:37:57 AM
        Yesser I doo... - By Black Soul September 26, 2004 at 03:03:21 PM
        Well... - By Ark ooc October 2, 2004 at 11:47:45 AM

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