OOC: Player of Coda

Malignant Felicity is a paradisaical abode to the faithful remains of a mighty pack. Once ruled by the magnificent wolf Genocide, now the wolves of this pack follow the laws of the Alpha Lance, son of Sorna, Beta and Genocide's best friend...

The sounds of crashing water fill your auds as you enter this tropical paradise. The tall trunks tower above you. The treetop canopy's seem to shade the beautiful land from the sun's rays. What a paradise this place seems. This place dubbed Malignant Felicity. As you draw closer to the boarders a stench slowly devours the air around you. The stench of death.

"Beware..." scream the birds from above you. "She kills for games. She kills for fun." Something deep inside tells you to listen. Your body tells you not to go no further. Do you listen or do you dare move into the pack borders. This could be a life or death decision...

Follow the Queen, or become a corpse that lines her border. The choice lies with you.

_{Refresh/Reload}

OOC: Player of Coda
IP: 76.253.98.196
Posted on December 17, 2009 at 06:10:33 PM by greensmurf

K, when I first read Coda's post, I thought it was a boy too. Here's a tip. When you're writing in first person, once in a while say something like "a female like me" or enter in the fact that it's a girl a couple times at least. Also, from your post, I cant really tell what she looks like either, so include some physical details as well to help the person who replied to you. =]

If you're not sure how to be sure and mention the wolf's gender or appearance, then maybe stay away from first person until you can. ^^

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ok [= - By Coda December 21, 2009 at 01:59:57 AM

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