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Posted on June 18, 2011 at 09:36:20 by x

When explaining out attacks, it would be nice to have a good angle reference. Like say the angle between their hips was 45 degrees. Something to make things just a little more clear.
Creativity
Attack 7
Defense 10
Realism
Attack 8
Defense 10
Entertainment 3

Other 2
Mechanics 4

44/50

Your post had more flow. The attacks were fine, easy to understand. I wouldn't mind some angle references at first, though your rearing attack was clear enough without.

Creativity
Attack 9 (high point for immediate flank second-attack).
Defense 9 (the one defense was creative because you were moving, but over all you just let the attacks happen. You did explain them out, but I saw no attempt to avoid or change the outcome from your pony.)
Realism
Attack 9
Defense 10
Entertainment 3.

Other 2
Mechanics 5
47/50

I've never been a huge fan of "critiquing" some of the things your opponents say in your posts. I'm in no way taking any points off for it, but I think saying that it would have taken her more than "one stride," but she got there anyway is almost like saying her post is wrong. Lol. She couldn't have known the defense. Whatever the case... saying that also says that you should be careful to leave loopholes in all your posts. "She took a short number of strides to put herself..." Or briefly and subtly address if he moves. "Assuming Infection does not manage to move, it would take Shotgun one short stride. Even with any movement making the distance longer, Shotgun moved so swiftly it would seem only one stride." :D

A little bit of an overstatement to potential injuries done by the ramming into the wall. But VERY creative attack. In fact, I'm geeking out a bit. Defenses were a touch low because you did the same defense (moving to the left), and I felt it could have had more creativity and explanation. There is no way I'm taking off on those attacks. They were super creative and realistic (especially in regards to the sightless kick).

Creativity
Attack 10
Defense 9
Realism
Attack 10
Defense 9
Entertainment 3

Other 2
Mechanics 5
48/50

At first I felt disappointed that you almost totally dodged the attack... then I got to thinking... you don't have much choice do you? It actually was very creative, and you acknowledge that Infection's own attack could actually hurt him. Your last attack was kinda a free for all attack, not super creative but... eh it works. The counter-attack was actually very creative and took a lot of thought. It was also quite realistic.

Creativity
Attack 9
Defense 9
Realism
Attack 10
Defense 10
Entertainment 2

Other 2
Mechanics 5
47/50

First pair: 46/50
Second horse: 47/50

Shotgun is the winner in this close battle.

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