Re(1): Water's affection IP: 71.67.113.156 Posted on December 14, 2011 at 07:36:33 AM by senserdj
This is really good! Only suggestion is be more specific in the first line. It's not clear what you mean by "A brilliant light of stars." If you just told us exactly what you see instead of throwing an adjective like "brilliant" in there, you'd have a perfect poem. Replies: There have been no replies.
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