Re(1): Learning how to fly

Re(1): Learning how to fly
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Posted on December 14, 2011 at 07:43:00 AM by senserdj

This is wonderful. I suggest you rewrite it from a different perspective, that being the omniscient perspective. That way, you take yourself out of the poem and the image of the two children flying becomes that much more magical.

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Re(1): Learning how to fly - By mphioup November 14, 2011 at 08:55:13 PM

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