At Leisure Lake the sun is always shining and only a few stray clouds roam the open sky; paradise is the one word that really describes it. This beautiful lake is clean and refreshing, the very best place to swim and fish. Pups are known to play here while older wolves watch at the side, engaged in their own activities.
The Man who thinks of Women as Angelic Figures (redo, open) IP: 24.229.133.55 Posted on September 28, 2012 at 11:37:28 PM by Edgar Allan Poe
OOC- His vocab is a bit more harder to understand, so I'll have the more difficult words definitions' down below.
IC-
The adult brute1, with his pelt as black as pitch2, let his legs move him forward, towards his destination, Leisure Lake. His emerald-colored eyes some made fun of, because they were different. Along with the fact some people were rude and said his eyes were the eyes of a fiend3. He looked at the green shrubbery around him, and kept his disposition4, calmed. He was a sagacious5 wolf, knowing many words to use and how to use them, along with what to do in certian situatuions.
His feeble6 legs plopped to the ground once he reached the lake, and thoughts were soon concieved. He had nothing to do really. No one talked to him. No one was nice to him. All rude, most made a mockery7 of him. He tried to keep himself refrained8, and he was doing a pretty good job of it as well. He was a peevish9, yet he was not infamy10, which most people fancy11, he was, and still is.
If you did vex12 him, especially with a irrevocable13 comment, he would become like a vile14, perpetual15, unfathomable16, conflagration17, with an apparation18, leaving you most likely stupefied19. With minute20, you just might be able to get to reposing21, in relief of his scary self. Others, didn't end up so lucky, leaving them with pestilence22. Aye23, he was odd alright.
He had forgotten about the deer carcass that he had dropped along the way, the carcass filled and surrounded with gossamer24. He had gotten up onto his feeble legs once more before ready to render25 to his carcass. He stretched a little, before the concieved thoughts left. He walked to the gossamer-filled carcass and threw it onto his back, walking back to the spot where he was incumbent26.
He laid himself down onto the sand once more before allaying27 himself.
1- brute: a beast or male
2- pitch: a thick black substance, tar
3- Fiend: demon, devil
4- Disposition: one's usual mood or temperament
5-Sagacious: wise
6- Feeble: lacking energy or power, very weak
7-Mockery: ridicule (mock)
8- Refrained: held one self back; abstained
9- Peevish: easily irritated or annoyed
10- Infamy: bieng notoriously evil; being wicked
11- Fancy: imagine, suppose, assume
12- Vex: to make angry or displeased; to annoy
13- Irrevocable: impossible to take back, retract, or revoke
14- Vile: depraved; villainous; disgusting
15- Perpetual: Everlasting; continuous
16- Unfathomable: immeasureable
17- Conflagration: a large scale fire
18- Apparaition: a ghostly appearance; phantom
19- Stupefied: shocked
20- minute: careful scrutiny and close examination
21- Reposing: a state or resting, sleeping
22- Pestilence: an evil influence or agent
23- Aye: yes
24- Gossamer: cobweb; any thin, flimsy material
25- Render: to return
26- Incumbent:lying, leaning, or resting on something else
27- Allaying: made quiet or calm; pacified
OOC- tell me, more or less complicated words!! Give me comments on how I did!
