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Re(1): That which doesn't destroy us only makes us stronger.
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Strong beginning as you gave etiquette insight on the lively hood of the Prophet and how his experiences proved him stronger. As you move from that paragraph you tend to wonder off your thesis and start to strengthen reasons on why life isn't made easy for us, and that its hard. The supporting examples as to why near death experiences making us in general "stronger" weakens and nearly disappears as you approach your conclusion. Your ideas and content is great I can see its there, however organization need critical attention. Please read your essay through and also be sure to look for spelling and grammar errors as well. Great work!

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