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. N U M B . //Critiques wanted, please
IP: 104.53.194.253
Posted on October 12, 2015 at 11:54:42 PM by Rana

female.adult.wanderer.loveless.Rana

I have outlasted all desire,
My dreams and I have grown apart;
My grief alone is left entire,
The gleamings of an empty heart.

So what do y'all think? I would love opinions on the photo, as I haven't done a manip in quite a few months, and am not quite sure if it is up to par or not. Also, is the poem too much? I think it's pretty, but I am not 100% on the location, or if it is too long or not. Does it give across a feeling of numbness/tranquility? Sorry for all the questions, ahah, just an uncertain kid today, I guess~

The storms of ruthless dispensation
Have struck my flowery garland numb,
I live in lonely desolation
And wonder when my end will come.

(paragraph two)

Thus on a naked tree-limb, blasted
By tardy winter's whistling chill,
A single leaf which has outlasted
Its season will be trembling still.

"Talking." Observing. 'Listening.'

Poem by Alexander Pushkin

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c: - By Rosie <3 October 13, 2015 at 04:41:55 PM

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