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Online Users

Welcome to the Hoof Prince Writing Workshop! In order to make Hoof Prince shine, all of our members are encouraged to continue to improve their writing skills. Some of us are more experienced in this area than others, so members can post here to seek help from more experienced players. Even if you want a critique, you can request one here.

• Critique - By Destiny January 13, 2010 at 09:00:58 PM
  
  
• OK Review me! - By Destiny December 29, 2009 at 01:06:42 AM
  • COMPLETE. - By ZERO January 7, 2010 at 11:43:21 AM
  
  
  
• Edit Me! - By Nicole November 18, 2009 at 10:29:58 AM
  • Wait wait.. This one! - By Nicole December 6, 2009 at 08:00:47 PM
    • Just one thing... - By October December 7, 2009 at 07:55:01 PM
    • well... - By Obsidian December 7, 2009 at 05:04:10 AM
      • Chapter One pt 1 - By Nicole December 30, 2009 at 06:36:10 PM
        • Chapter One prt 2 - By Nicole December 30, 2009 at 07:07:24 PM
  
  
  
• WRITING ASSIGNMENT #001 - By Kanina November 13, 2009 at 05:32:02 AM
  
  
• My first RP sample - By Riot August 26, 2009 at 00:18:10 AM
  
  
• Shenan... - By Zombie August 16, 2009 at 00:58:34 AM
  • Here you are! - By Shenan August 16, 2009 at 01:33:25 AM
    • Let's try this again... - By Zombie August 17, 2009 at 05:31:21 PM
  
  
  
• writing level? - By Kanina May 19, 2009 at 09:45:47 PM
  
  
• Playing Level? - By K April 23, 2009 at 10:19:56 PM
  • Hmm. - By ZERO April 26, 2009 at 01:31:29 PM
  
  
  
• Battle Critique Please - By M&M March 27, 2009 at 09:16:26 PM
  
  
• Sooo... - By Véasse March 14, 2009 at 11:14:43 PM
  • Wow, [what i felt...].. - By Sparten March 25, 2009 at 08:37:01 PM
    • ^_^ - By Véasse March 27, 2009 at 07:48:48 PM
      • I thinki sounded wrong. - By Sparten... March 27, 2009 at 08:27:43 PM
        • xD - By Véasse March 28, 2009 at 11:27:04 PM
  
  
  
• Writing Level? - By Baby Doll February 22, 2009 at 01:15:21 PM
  
  
• skill writing assessment, pleasums <3 - By chia February 21, 2009 at 06:41:35 PM
  
  
• Why do I keep losing? Battle critique - By CrystalVixon February 19, 2009 at 11:45:01 AM
  • HMM - By ZERO February 19, 2009 at 05:12:17 PM
  
  
  
• Writing Help - By Darkflower718 February 13, 2009 at 08:38:18 PM
  • My Thoughts - By green_star February 14, 2009 at 08:42:51 PM
    • Re(1):My Thoughts - By Darkflower718 February 18, 2009 at 08:45:34 PM
      • :-) - By green_star February 18, 2009 at 11:15:44 PM
  
  
  
• Feed back/ skill level - By Lostriss February 10, 2009 at 05:17:21 AM
  
  
• input? ^^ - By Georgia January 31, 2009 at 11:17:45 AM
  • Critique coming! - By Rain February 3, 2009 at 00:18:42 AM
  
  
  
• ZERO'S LITTLE BLACK BOOK - By ZERO January 15, 2009 at 11:34:37 PM
  • PASSWORDS - By ZERO February 8, 2009 at 03:27:26 PM
  • GRAMMAR ETC. - By ZERO February 8, 2009 at 03:23:42 PM
  • VOCABULARY - By ZERO January 16, 2009 at 00:18:15 AM
  • LAYOUTS AND FONTS - By ZERO January 15, 2009 at 11:53:41 PM
    • :) - By Sarah February 3, 2009 at 08:43:56 AM
      • May I add? - By Azza February 15, 2009 at 10:31:41 PM
  
  
  
• Skill Level Assessment - By M&M January 5, 2009 at 06:46:13 PM
  • my thoughts... - By green_star January 14, 2009 at 06:00:05 PM
  • Well Dearest>>> - By Rain January 9, 2009 at 08:45:51 PM
    • MY THOUGHTS... - By ZERO January 19, 2009 at 05:23:04 PM
      • Thank you all!>> - By M&M January 19, 2009 at 05:35:42 PM
  
  
  
• assessment? - By innocent January 5, 2009 at 08:08:15 AM
  • C+ *Joke* - By CrystalVixon January 9, 2009 at 01:09:49 PM
  
  
  
• Short story. What do you think? - By Julz January 1, 2009 at 08:06:11 PM
  • Part Two - By Julz January 1, 2009 at 08:08:33 PM
  
  
  
• Critique? - By Julz December 13, 2008 at 07:53:45 PM
  • A little helping hand x - By CrystalVixon January 9, 2009 at 12:21:24 PM
    • =] - By Julz January 9, 2009 at 03:17:09 PM
      • ... - By PooKa January 9, 2009 at 04:43:01 PM
  
  
  
• level? - By Georgia December 11, 2008 at 11:40:04 AM
  • My thoughts - By Candy December 12, 2008 at 09:05:57 AM
    • <3 - By Georgia December 12, 2008 at 11:31:31 AM
  
  
  
• i would like to improve... - By nicole December 11, 2008 at 10:22:49 AM
  • Well (Zero too please) - By Candy December 12, 2008 at 09:11:50 AM
    • Hmm.. - By ZERO December 13, 2008 at 00:08:50 AM
      • thanks :) - By nicole December 22, 2008 at 10:03:32 AM
        • - By . December 22, 2008 at 10:04:27 AM
  
  
  
• Someone? >> - By moose December 9, 2008 at 04:16:30 PM
  • hmmm... - By green_star December 9, 2008 at 08:41:17 PM
    • thankies. - By moose December 10, 2008 at 03:35:59 PM
  
  
  
• feedback please? - By green_star December 3, 2008 at 12:48:02 PM
  • Done! - By ZERO December 3, 2008 at 01:44:16 PM
    • thanks! - By green_star December 4, 2008 at 07:54:31 PM
  
  
  
• M&M>> - By green_star November 17, 2008 at 09:45:29 PM
  • Hmm... - By M&M November 17, 2008 at 09:49:14 PM
    • no problem>> - By green_star November 17, 2008 at 09:51:55 PM
      • I will... - By M&M November 17, 2008 at 10:17:19 PM
  
  
  
• once again>>> - By Rain November 13, 2008 at 05:36:54 PM
  • Once again I'm here ^^ - By CrystalVixon November 13, 2008 at 07:22:45 PM
  
  
  
• feedback? - By The Undertaker November 7, 2008 at 02:32:48 PM
  • Well =) - By CrystalVixon November 11, 2008 at 08:00:10 PM
  
  
  
• My level... - By Shadow November 5, 2008 at 07:14:16 PM
  • My opinion> - By Rain December 2, 2008 at 10:27:30 AM
    • -tackles- - By Shadow December 3, 2008 at 07:38:46 PM
  
  
  
• feedback? - By JETT. November 4, 2008 at 01:44:07 PM
  • Ummm - By Candy November 6, 2008 at 02:17:10 PM
    • ^_^ - By JETT. November 7, 2008 at 12:55:30 PM
  
  
  
• There, Their or They’re - By CrystalVixon October 15, 2008 at 11:59:22 AM
  
  
• What Level am I at? - By CrystalVixon October 13, 2008 at 07:07:53 PM
  • Well CV! - By Candy October 17, 2008 at 08:56:42 AM
    • :( - By green_star October 17, 2008 at 09:57:19 AM
  
  
  
• wants feedback plz! - By green_star October 13, 2008 at 05:00:57 PM
  • Well... - By Candy October 17, 2008 at 10:19:41 AM
    • thanks! - By green_star October 17, 2008 at 12:25:08 PM
  
  
  
• Circe fight post - By Benni October 7, 2008 at 07:42:08 PM
  • well - By Candy October 7, 2008 at 07:54:16 PM
    • revised - By Benni October 7, 2008 at 08:36:08 PM
  
  
  
• Sample Post (Please Critic)... - By M&M October 2, 2008 at 09:53:10 PM
  • Lets see... - By Zero October 3, 2008 at 11:53:37 AM
    • Zero... - By M&M October 3, 2008 at 09:36:20 PM
      • Your welcome :) - By Zero October 7, 2008 at 03:27:22 PM
  
  
  
• Dasheel post - By Mia October 2, 2008 at 04:43:36 PM
  • I'll try! - By Zero October 3, 2008 at 11:42:17 AM
  
  
  
• An Inquiry Regarding Length... - By M&M October 1, 2008 at 09:26:01 PM
  • well - By Mia October 2, 2008 at 04:46:36 PM
    • Thanks! - By M&M October 2, 2008 at 05:11:13 PM
      • and btw... - By green_star October 3, 2008 at 12:48:28 PM
  
  
  
• not a member... yet! but would like critique - By green_star September 30, 2008 at 00:11:04 AM
  
  
• Everyone should watch this! - By Zero September 22, 2008 at 08:51:28 PM
  • Awww - By Mia September 23, 2008 at 02:12:40 PM
  
  
  
• help? - By casey September 20, 2008 at 06:34:29 PM
  • Done! - By Zero September 22, 2008 at 02:28:34 PM
    • xD - By Casey September 23, 2008 at 08:18:13 PM
    • ok - By Casey September 22, 2008 at 08:23:19 PM
  
  
  
• Post of Equis - By Serena September 16, 2008 at 06:29:46 PM
  • Zero at your service! - By Zero September 22, 2008 at 02:27:28 PM
  
  
  
• Will edit later... - By Gale September 16, 2008 at 06:24:32 PM
  • Edited. - By Gale September 17, 2008 at 07:47:43 PM
  
  
  
• Gaia post for improvement - By Kristen September 16, 2008 at 06:15:49 PM
  • Re(1): Hmmm... - By Azza September 16, 2008 at 10:07:12 PM
  
  
  
• Yeah im here - By Mia September 16, 2008 at 04:11:43 PM
  • -loves- - By Candy September 16, 2008 at 05:52:59 PM
    • *ish loved and huggles back* - By Mia September 16, 2008 at 07:29:02 PM
      • *POST HERE * - By Mia September 16, 2008 at 07:56:47 PM