Good Morning All..Last evening I was searching on here for an old story that I had written
describing Pearl Harbor Day...Couldn't recall what year I had written it but this morning I
went to Google with a basic description and there it was along with continued remarks from
some of you regarding the story..Sometime after I had posted that story here on the Forum,
a former Army veteran from Vietnam messaged me he had seen a reprint of the same story
on Pinterest (spelling)...Remember Pearl Harbor as we do the Alamo...Chief

(This was on Google this morning)
I suppose this may seem like boasting but it was a rare experience to happen to me
personally...Rec'd a call about a story I had written way back in 2001 about the events
of a Pearl Harbor Day celebration. The call was seeking my permission to print the story
and hand out copies of the story to folks that will be attending a Pearl Harbor day here
in Arizona where so many artifacts of that war is displayed...Of course, I was flattered...
joked with the caller to check my bad spelling and questionable verbs and adjectives...
I titled this story THE OLD MAN.....not a hint in the title what the story was about.
Perhaps you've already read it is posted down below with my other stories. Chief

A major networks camera panned slowly around and through the assembled crowd of
people. Colorful scenes of landscape, seascape, and early morning mists hanging
over the lush Hawaiian landmarks. Scattered through the milling crowd were many
military uniforms. The glaring whites of the Navy, to the more subdued browns and
blues of the Army and Air Force. Lots of multi-colored and floral patterned shirts along
with short legged trousers was indicative of the warm, sultry temperatures there at
Pearl Harbor. The camera continued to revolve and scan in a seemingly random
pattern. The narrator droned on with facts and figures about this date being the 60th
anniversary of the Japanese attack on this Pacific Island, and that being the date of
the entry of the United States into a war with the Empire of Japan. Facts that had been
oft told and repeated so many times and serving now as a on-air time filler. The early
morning sunrise was filtering through the steamy appearing fog hanging over the bay
and shafts of bright light appeared almost spiritual, marking this sad day of
remembrance. A brisk breeze tugged at the onlookers clothing, and wafted the hair of
ladies in the crowd. The commentator stated, that the time on the clock would be
observed to the exact moment that the sneak attack had occurred that December
day back in 1941. The camera was now looking toward the Arizona Memorial, and the
remarkably mundane sounding voice of the narrator was telling of the structures design
features. It may have been more informative, had the bored sounding person not
attempted to fill every moment with superfluous mouthings. Again the camera moved
to the rows and groups of people as the meaningless sounding broadcasted words
continued. Close up on the lens there was a quick flash of a face---a face so close
that it’s features were indistinguishable---just a rapid pink flourish and then it was
What happened? The seeking, moving camera had stopped in its searching the more
distant faces in it’s inantimate eye, and very rapidly had reversed back to where the
pink flash had been noted. There, now very clear and distinct, was the full side view of
a man. The complexion now showed more than a hazy pink, but almost a flushed,
sunburned looking red profile. The man wore a head covering the military call a fore
and aft cap (Navy Chiefs used to call them ‘piss-cutters’). On the front portion of the
cap was the gold script writing PEARL HARBOR SURVIVOR and under that writing was
some other identifying groups name. Tufts of silvery hair poked out from around the
caps edges and the camera was so close it could record the generous growths of hair
on the old mans ears. Why was the camera lingering on this old veteran? Did he have
some part to play in the activities---was he famous, or just perhaps the cameraman
knew who he was, and was giving the old guy his five minutes of fame over national
television. A bugle sounded attention to colors and the commentator made pertinent
remarks concerning the sounds. Perhaps now, the old man sensed he was being
watched, for he turned full face to the cameras lens. The camera was
accommodating, but did nothing to glamorize the ancient mariners appearance.
Faded blue eyes looking out, once in youth, probably heart- rendering blue to many
young female admirers, now almost as colorless as blue sky showing through a white
cloud. Deep crows feet around and pouches under those eyes,denoted lots of getting
“rained on and putting away to dry---”. A broad, florid face, with lots of red viens
showing on the bulbous nose and fleshy cheekbones. Probably genes of a whisky
drinking Irishman or a beer guzzling German---maybe a ‘boozer’ himself. A more than
generous sized mouth that turned down at the corners with thin lips, almost to the point
of none showing. A spot of dried blood near the edge of the old fellows chin,
indicating that perhaps his once steely and steady hand, now had the shakes from age
and infirmity. A spot of silvery, red looking whiskers, high up on the cheek, showed that
the shave had not been as thorough as perhaps it had once been when a superior
officer had inspected his youthful physical appearance. The camera seemed to be
frozen onto the old mans face, as he stared unblinkingly into its dead but electronically
alive eye. The bugle sounded again---exactly 0800 and simultaneously there was a
clanging of ships bells and the shrill whistle of a boatswains pipe. This moment in time
however, instead of sounding colors as would be normal on a military installation or
ship, it was the Navy Band playing a most rousing version of The National Anthem. The
booming sounds of the drums---the spine-tingling shrill of the horns--the attention
grabbing clash of the cymbals. The camera remained focused on the old mans face,
lingering there for some unknown reason. The voice of the narrator was now silent, and
the air waves were being filled with the patroitic sounds of the huge band. Part way
into the sounds of the National Anthem, a tear rolled out of the old fellows eye--then a
tear from the other eye. Like a slow rolling object, it was gathering momentum as it
progressed down the ruddy old cheek. On one side, that salty tear was all the way
down to the corner of the drooping, thin lipped mouth while on the other side the tears
were getting caught up in the unshaven patch of whiskers on his cheek and lingered
there, collecting for a moment and then in a flush, that side also, down to the sad
mouth. I wondered to myself as I looked into that old mans eyes, what terrible things
those eyes had recorded onto his brain back then and that he perhaps still clung to
these long years later. Had those eyes seen men about the business of making war
and waging war---had he seen his own sons or grandsons caught up in the carnage of
war. The eyes of the old Vet told no stories--eyes so time faded and sad, with tears
falling from those eyes and his probably not even knowing of them. Hurtful and tearful
emotions for the man inside that now aged frame, and his not even realizing they
were falling or why. John H. Wilborn USN (RETIRED)

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